From f8b0608ab3a73243e9cbf0d6dd58c40efdc67d0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jude <judesouthworth@pm.me>
Date: Wed, 19 Apr 2023 14:15:46 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] comments from supervisor

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 whitepaper/Dissertation.pdf | Bin 446046 -> 446046 bytes
 whitepaper/Dissertation.tex |   9 +++++++++
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+)

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diff --git a/whitepaper/Dissertation.tex b/whitepaper/Dissertation.tex
index 288364b..04a6104 100644
--- a/whitepaper/Dissertation.tex
+++ b/whitepaper/Dissertation.tex
@@ -2,6 +2,15 @@
 % !TeX TXS-program:compile = txs:///pdflatex/[--shell-escape]
 \documentclass[12pt,a4paper]{report}
 
+%todo writing style stream of concisense
+% move stuff to lit review and explain/justify
+% finish implementation
+% requirements spec, clear evaluation of security with links to proofs etc.
+% clear achievements of content in regards to goals
+% reflect on achievemtns, difficulties, novelty etc.
+% references as nouns
+% diagrams maybe
+
 \usepackage{Bath-CS-Dissertation}
 \usepackage{amsmath}
 \usepackage{amssymb}